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Bleeding Sin: intro by ~Karis-bitch:iconKaris-bitch:



I never realized something so painful and so deadly could feel as good as it did. It might’ve been the masochist in me dominating, but it felt so incredibly remarkable.
The vampire had come in through my open window, which I now know to leave closed. Pinned against my own be beneath him, his mouth on my neck, I couldn’t save myself.
“A great catch,” he muttered, enthralled by my trembling. He wiped the blood off my  neck with two slender fingers, then licked it off them slowly. “The sweet blood of a soul that remains untainted. But a boy…never have I fed from a boy…I heard you were bitter.” But he smiled and pressed his lips against the cuts on my neck. “Not bitter at all…”
His teeth once more sank deep into my skin, and I let myself moan slightly. I began to see stars, reacting at long last to the venom on his fangs…but I refuse to lose this battle. I wont die from this…and he caught that…Took hold of my chin, turned my head…stared me hard in the eyes…
“Will you  not die?” he asked, his eyes shining with unexpressed emotion.
“…Don’t know the meaning of the word…die,” I managed to say. He frowned, then wiped away the bit of blood that had managed to drip from my mouth.
“You are indeed curious things you…humans. Giving up doesn’t seem to be in your blood. And I would know.”
“Hah….you’re funny…” I was losing it, and he smiled.
“Do you honestly want to live after this? Never, will you be human again.”
“Was I ever human…to begin with?”
“You’ve got a lot of nerve kid, saying something like that to a vampire.” Though my vision was blurred and though I couldn’t think straight, my hand shot out and gripped the collar of his shirt.
“Never…” I growled. “Call me kid…It’s…Vincent…call me otherwise, and you’ll…regret it.” That was when he got that crazed look in his eyes. The look of a madman. The look that I’ve seen all to often.
“You will learn to regret those words, wont you,” he said, his voice just as crazed as his eyes as he pulled his arm back. He drove his hand, razor-sharp nails first, through my stomach. My world began to go black, and he leaned over and whispered in my ear just as he brought his hand out of my stomach, almost pulling something with it. “Vincent.”
©2008-2009 ~Karis-bitch
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Author's Comments

Okay...introduction....yeah, nothing special. Chapter one will be up either sometime this week, or next week. It depends on how hard Kari's going to work on getting me to post it. (Last night she made me stay at here house so she could convince me to post this. I Spent several hours in an epic battle with Squid trying to save my strawberry ice cream, and so me and kari finally decided to just go sit on her roof and eat it.)
If I dont get a review of this by Wednesday though, I'm taking it down and you'll never hear of it again...

And there is 1 question that I NEVER want to hear, you got it??
The evil question: Is this yaoi?
The answer: Keep reading the damn story and you'll find out!

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:iconapplechaoskiller:
geez...vincent kicks so much ass!!lol...i mean threatening a vamp that is

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Wolf Spirit

It's in my nature to be kind, gentle, and loving...
but know this

Matters of protecting my family, and my heart, dont mess with me...for i am also the most powerful and relentless creature you will ever know.

My pack-Rye Fluffy, Rylu, Fley
:iconkaris-bitch:
Yeah, he's quite the badass for doing that...lol...so, as the first one to have commented on this, the fate of this story relies on nothing but your answer to this question: do you want to read more?

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Heh, thats pretty cool. If you come close enough to me, Kari'll beat you up politley, then apologize a hundred times over, then beat herself up for beating you up...weird.
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The infamous Kari! [link]
:iconapplechaoskiller:
HAHA...yeah why not...i want to know what happens to vincent

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Wolf Spirit

It's in my nature to be kind, gentle, and loving...
but know this

Matters of protecting my family, and my heart, dont mess with me...for i am also the most powerful and relentless creature you will ever know.

My pack-Rye Fluffy, Rylu, Fley
:iconkaris-bitch:
...you sound so enthusiastic...but whatever. I'll keep posting it. (its either that or get shot by Kari and fed to Squid)

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Heh, thats pretty cool. If you come close enough to me, Kari'll beat you up politley, then apologize a hundred times over, then beat herself up for beating you up...weird.
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The infamous Kari! [link]
:iconapplechaoskiller:
lol...she wouldn't shoot you...she would probably hit you over the head with a baseball bat

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Wolf Spirit

It's in my nature to be kind, gentle, and loving...
but know this

Matters of protecting my family, and my heart, dont mess with me...for i am also the most powerful and relentless creature you will ever know.

My pack-Rye Fluffy, Rylu, Fley
:iconkaris-bitch:
lol, yeah. But she'd still feed me to Squid. There's no escaping that...

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Heh, thats pretty cool. If you come close enough to me, Kari'll beat you up politley, then apologize a hundred times over, then beat herself up for beating you up...weird.
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The infamous Kari! [link]
:iconapplechaoskiller:
of course...who knows, you might taste like chicken

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Wolf Spirit

It's in my nature to be kind, gentle, and loving...
but know this

Matters of protecting my family, and my heart, dont mess with me...for i am also the most powerful and relentless creature you will ever know.

My pack-Rye Fluffy, Rylu, Fley
:iconkaris-bitch:
Oh yeah. Or maybe seafood, and he'd (sorta) be a cannibal.

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Heh, thats pretty cool. If you come close enough to me, Kari'll beat you up politley, then apologize a hundred times over, then beat herself up for beating you up...weird.
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The infamous Kari! [link]
:iconapplechaoskiller:
oh well...we might never know

--
Wolf Spirit

It's in my nature to be kind, gentle, and loving...
but know this

Matters of protecting my family, and my heart, dont mess with me...for i am also the most powerful and relentless creature you will ever know.

My pack-Rye Fluffy, Rylu, Fley

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